Doesn't sound bad, not my type of music personally though. Just want to say though, when singing, you should pull back and take a breath, or edit them out. It's distracting.
I think it sounds good, if you need any help with editing, (Mastering the tracks, and such) hit me up and I'll see what I can do.
Like someone else said, you might want to just have 1 vocal track on it. If you want, I can try to come up with a bass track for it. (Up to you)
Yeah, I've got other songs I'm working on getting released. I use newgrounds like a dumping grounds for ideas for tracks and the like. I may come back to this one later. There are other songs I need to get mastered first. There's a guy on the label I go through that I think does this for a living.
i like this song. but again (like special day) i think you could add a violin part or something for some parts of this song. but it's still a pretty cool song.
I do have a violin, just haven't got around to learning how to play it. lol, It's alot harder to self teach the violin than it is the guitar. gosh, i think i've said this already. Anyway, i think if i get a fretboard for the violin it will be a lot easier to learn. Sorry If I repeated myself. Thanks for the review!
this isn't really my style of music, (no i'm not all about heavy metal, i have a lighter side....) but for what it is i like it. i think the song needs to be longer. maybe add some more to it if you ever get around to re-recording it. such as (in my opinion) maybe add a piano in the background or strings (if you don't know what strings are, it's like a violin) but that's me..
overall though, i think it's a very heartwarming song.
Yes, I agree, it does need to be re-recorded some day. I actually do have a violin, just haven't gotten around to teaching myself how to play it!! Gotta find a fret board for it so I can transcribe tabs and what not. That, and i know the vocals aren't that great, there are parts where I cringe even when I listen to it. Thanks for the Review bro!!
That's hella funny! i like that song.. it does need better equipment though. (you'd be surprised what you could find with a google search o.O) but overall i think it was a funny song. nice job
Yeah, like i said, this one was done in iraq, so i didn't have anything available. I'll definitely look into the new equipment. If anything a nice microphone would help tons. That and i would like to be able to record the vocal and guitar tracks seperately..... We'll see though. Thanks for the review, your awesome!!
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